It was probably at 17:30.
…wait
…wait
…wait
And it was about 18:00 o’clock. Where is my bus I should take the bus at 17:20 o’clock. Ahhhaaa….Where is? I had no patience to wait for bus…… OMG!! I had already exhausted.
In order to look for fun in tried that I begin to observe every person waiting for bus, some was listening the MP3, some chatting with their friends, some just looking the floor, even some sitting on the floor.
Finally, the bus has come.
2 comments:
Here's a few things to work on:
A lot of your sentences are missing important words. For example, the first sentence has no subject so you'll have to add a noun. The sentence "I already exhausted" has no verb (exhausted is an adjective that tells how you feel). You'll need to add a verb. Check the rest of your sentences to make sure they all have a subject and a verb
I hate waiting for bus. The buses always are not on time. I hate them....
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